The Thanksgiving Revenge
Sudden death never comes announced.
That was the last
thought of Harry as he glanced at his feet. He was trying to shout, but his
voice got buried totally as his mouth was stuffed with mud and dust, choking
him. He was trying to get himself out of the claws of certain death, but there
was nothing he could do except watch helplessly.
‘Mmmmmm….mmmmmmm.’
The muffled sound was the only thing that could come out of his throat while
gagging him.
His eyes widened as
his feet went under, followed by his abdomen.
Even lying down
straight hasn't helped.
Ordinarily, in such
kind of situations, sprawling down is the best option, but not this time. This
time it was the end. Harry could feel the grip all around his body as bit by bit
he was sucked away from the world.
And nobody would
know.
His friends might
never know what happened to him. He could still hear their laughter, Maggie's
tender tone coming from just a little more than a hundred yards away. But he
was unable to do anything, powerless to call for help.
And as he saw
himself going down, he could only stare, until his eyes were also covered, and
he went beneath the surface, never to surface again.
His fate was
similar to many others who came here before him.
THANKSGIVING
DAY 1
Six hours ago
'Wow, so this is
your uncle's house?'
Harrison Hold
stared at his girlfriend as he admired the house. The other three — Sam Trully,
Doug Throd, and Gianna Feud noticed the residence with their jaws hung open as well.
It was certainly not what they had expected.
'Well, this
definitely doesn't look like a haunted house.' Sam confirmed as the others
nodded their agreement.
Maggie Price, the
fifth person in the team and the niece of the owner of this residence looked at
her friends grinning as she concealed her eyes from the blazing sunlight. It
was her idea to come here and spend this year's Thanksgiving here. The small
town of Glasgow, Montana, is more than twelve hours away from Minneapolis, but
she wanted to get away from the city for a few days with her boyfriend. Her
uncle, Richard Price, was the owner of this place, though he vacated the house
long back. As a scientist, he was called to Boston at Harvard University to
work as a Lecturer and resident scientist, so Richard grabbed the opportunity
with both hands, not looking back at the house. Maggie and her family had just
heard that there was some kind of accident here, which made Richard keep this
place under lock and key and leave as soon as he could.
It has already been
a couple of years since Richard died in Boston.
Maggie's parents —
Jamie and Tod, were given the keys to this house, but they never came here. In
fact, this was Maggie's first time here as well.
The building was
not too big, mimicking most of the other rural houses in any parts of the US.
After crossing the gate, the lawn, and the narrow balcony, the brown wooden
door to the house looked inviting. The whole area was big and square with
probably an area of more than three thousand Square feet, with a lawn at the
front, a single-story building in the middle, and a garden in the back hidden
from view. The balcony was more than enough for the five of them to lounge with
a beer in the evening.
'Yeah.' Harry said
this time with a smile on his face and looked at his girlfriend, winking.
'Thanks, Maggie, for suggesting the place. It will be quite a few days during
Thanksgiving.'
And they all
sprinted inside the big house, leaving the parked Jeep in the garage.
The living room was
big, covered with television on one side with the fireplace just below it. On
the other side was the open kitchen, which seemed to have seen better days. The
couch, the Jade statue in the left corner, and the mantle place all looked old
and abandoned.
'There should be
three bedrooms.' Maggie said as the others kept the luggage and foods in the
room. 'Two on the left and one on the right.'
'We'll take the
right one.' Her boyfriend said, his eyes glinting as Maggie lifted the curtains
and let the afternoon sunlight enter the whole place.
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'So, what's the story
of this place?' Harry asked.
''Well.' Maggie
shrugged as she tried to recall. 'This place is more than a hundred years old,
belonging to some scientist in the early twentieth century, before World War
I.'
'Wow.' Gianna said,
looking amazed as she lounged on the lap of her boyfriend, Doug, both sipping
the beer. 'That old, ha?'
'Yeah.' The
nineteen-year-old said. 'I don't know much about the history of this place,
just that Richard bought it from someone wanting to sell the place off. And my
uncle wanted a peaceful place, away from the hustle of work.'
'Hmm, real charming
guy.' Sam said as he and Harry did high five, under Maggie's disapproving look.
It was seven in the
evening when they settled together for a beer and the Thanksgiving Dinner. With
the whole of the year nearly ending and the threat of pandemic finally
subsiding a bit, the five friends have decided to move away for these four days
during Thanksgiving, spending time with each other away from everything. The
cities everywhere were still reeling from the effects of the pandemic, and
after being in their homes for nearly eight months, the teenagers just wanted
to get away. When the discussion occurred, it was Maggie's idea to come here.
It was as serene as it can get. There's supposed to be a lake nearby at the
back of the house. The friends have decided to go there to catch fish tomorrow.
After that, they would explore the area.
The drizzle that fell outside made the climate
serene. It was as if the world was cleansing itself, slowly.
Shhhhhhh..........Shhhhhhhhh.
It was after an
hour or so that Harry went to the washroom, and he heard a sudden rustling
sound along with the small dimming lights from the garden. And he went to that
side, curious.
And he never came
back.
DAY 2
'Where are you, Harry?'
Maggie whispered as she moved through the fog.
'H-A-R-R-Y.' The
voices of the other three people from three different sides of the woods could
be heard. She couldn't see them due to visibility reduced to less than ten
feet.
They awaited the
whole night, but Harry never came back. He had gone to the washroom around 8:30
in the evening, and after that, nobody has seen him. Maggie wanted to check
everywhere possible in the night itself, but the others thought maybe he was
doing a prank. But a trick would never last for nearly 10-12 hours. So, they
all came out in search of their friend as soon as the sun came up.
Maggie rubbed her
palms together, blowing warm air into them as she moved forward. Dry leaves
crunched under her feet as she tried to cut through the mist and go deeper into
the woods.
They searched the
lawn, the house, and the garden, but there seemed to be no trace of Harry
anywhere. The bushes in the garden and the yard were not big enough to hide
him, and even some parts of the Nursery were devoid of any vegetation. So,
there was no place for him to hide.
To check if he had
come to the woods and the lake at night, the four friends came up here.
But they returned
to the house a couple of hours later, empty-handed. Even his cell phone was not
responding.
'Where can he be?'
'No idea. I swear
if Harry is playing a prank, he will get a hard beating from me.'
'Yeah, totally.'
Maggie was barely
listening as the evening passed. It has been more than twenty-four hours since
her boyfriend was missing, but unless they knew it was no prank, they couldn't
even call the police or his parents.
Today, there was no
rain outside, but the light breeze still brought chills to Maggie as she came
out on the balcony to the garden.
'Please come back
to me, Harry.' She whispered, looking at nothing in particular.
DAY 3
Shhhhhhhhhh.........Shhhhhhhhh.
Gianna and Doug
were sleeping together in each other's arms when they heard the soft rustling
sound outside. After searching in the woods and nearby places for the past two
days, they were tired, as was Sam. While Sam slept in the other bedroom beside
the one Maggie was sleeping alone, the couple tried to enjoy the night first.
But the tiredness
overcame them quickly as they drifted off to sleep. So, waking up suddenly, Gianna
was still groggy.
And then she heard
it again. The strange swishing sound, from the back of the house, towards the
garden.
It was sweet to the
ears and attracted her like a magnet. She tore away the sheet covering her
slender and slim body. Quickly, she donned the gown by her bedside and opened
the door to the backside balcony that led to the garden.
'What......where
are you going?' Doug was awoken by the sudden noise of the door opening and saw
his girlfriend leaving the room.
'Gi....wait!'
But Gianna seemed to
be in a trance, not listening to anything around her. She moved at a slow pace
towards the balcony, followed by her perplexed boyfriend. And then he heard it
too. The rustling sound was soothing to his ears. The drizzle that fell outside
made the weather chilly, but both Doug and Gianna didn't feel the cold as they
moved forward.
'Oh....what... What
is happening?'
'I... I have no
idea.'
It was a couple of
minutes later that the couple came back to their senses. But by then, it was
already too late.
They felt the
tightness gripping them as they were sucked deeper underground. Both tried to
throw the hands and legs, but the grip just toughened as they started to choke.
And as the night
progressed, the two hapless humans were drowned, just like their friend before,
never to see the light of the next day again.
DAY 4
'What the hell?'
Sam asked. 'How do people keep on disappearing?'
'I... I have no
idea.' Maggie said as she sniffed. 'I am scared now.'
'Don't worry, mam.'
The Inspector said. 'We will find out soon enough.'
Once Sam and Maggie
woke up in the morning on their last day of the vacation, they found out about
two more of their friends were missing. For an hour or so, they probably
thought Gianna and Doug were romancing outside, but once the day turned from
morning to afternoon, and they didn't come back, there was nothing else to do.
Maggie called the cops as time passed and told them about the disappearance of
all the three people.
The team of cops
searched the whole area up to the lake till the evening. But there was nothing.
No trace of Harry, Doug, or Gianna at all.
'In the morning,
our divers will check the lake itself.' The Inspector said before leaving as
the rain started.
'We should leave as
soon as the police go back tomorrow.' Sam said as he and Maggie were having
dinner in her room. She was too afraid to come out of the room, so they decided
to have the food in her bedroom. The pitter-patter sound of the rain was clear
from here as well.
'Yes.' Maggie said
as she sniffed.
'What could have
happened to them?' Sam whispered to himself as Maggie looked at him.
'I have--'
Shhhhhhhhhh.........Shhhhhhhhh.
Her words never
finished as they both heard the soothing rustling sound outside.
As Sam stood up to
go outside, Maggie took her earphones and quickly donned them, following him.
Abruptly her eyes blazed, anticipating something.
She quietly
followed Sam as he moved slowly and opened the door to the balcony. He strode
slowly towards the garden as if in a trance, as a light sound came from somewhere
in the Nursery itself.
He moved one step
at a time as Maggie stood on the balcony itself, a hint of a smile appearing on
her face.
It was after a
minute that he stopped and slowly began to sit on the ground in the middle of the
garden. It was the same place where there were no trees or bushes. A light
seemed to radiate from the mud there. The earth was dampened all around him as
he sat---
Suddenly his eyes
snapped open as he----
'What the hell?' He
asked looking around him as his butt was swallowed by the dampened earth.
'What....what's happening? How am I here?'
'You are here
because I brought you here.'
Sam looked around,
and his eyes fell on Maggie, who just stood there with her earphones covering
her ears.
What is she doing
there?
'The earth here is
sucking you in, Sam.' Maggie said as a sneer appeared on her beautiful face.
Her eyes sparkled with fire as she bared her teeth.
'What are you...you
doing? Save me, save me please.' Sam said as he tried to break free from the
veracious grip of the dampen earth all around him. Instead, he fell on his
back, as the whole mud around him covered his legs and arms.
'NO.' Maggie
shouted. 'You should have known that I will never spare you.'
'What are you
talking about?' Sam felt the mud around his neck as he spoke.
'Oh. You forgot,
isn't it? But I will never forget that night.' Maggie sneered as she watched
Sam drowning slowly within the earth. 'My first prom night in the college. And
you drugged me, you asshole. I may not have been in my full senses, but I was
aware of you, Doug, and Harry raping me, one by one. And Gianna was the one who
asked me to drink that Vodka.
I knew you were all
in it together. And I planned my revenge on you all. It took me time, but at
last, I found out the perfect way to take my revenge. I found the diary of my
uncle last year. He has written all about this particular piece of earth in the
garden. This house belonged to Dr. Alfred Newtown, one of the leading
scientists during World War I. He had experimented on different kinds of quicksand
and earth, and this was the result.
He intended to use
it as a weapon at first, but Newtown died of a heart attack before showing it
to the authorities. Richard came to know about this after he brought the house
and his assistant lost her life there. My uncle found the hidden diary of
Newtown in this house and got all the details. He left this house, never to
come back again.
But this
information helped me to get my revenge.'
'You bitch.' Sam
said, as nearly the whole of his body was swallowed by the mud. 'You knew how
Harry, Doug, and Gianna vanished but----'
He never finished
his words. The mud made its way inside his mouth as he started to choke. His
eyes widened while his face reddened, trying to suck air while his nose filled
with the earth.
'Bl....bllllb.' A
soft gurgling sound came from his mouth as he was submerged gradually inside
the earth.
Maggie stood there
for a couple of minutes more and then sighed.
She hadn't told Sam
the entire thing. She left out the part that this mud got only activated by the
water. The rain on the first night, the third night, and tonight was the reason
the sucking in happened.
'But there was no
need to tell this information to that asshole.' She said to herself as she came
into the bedroom and put her headphones on the table.
Serves them right.
Angandeep
Kr Chatterjee
Angandeep Kr Chatterjee is an IT Engineer, working out in
Kolkata, India, in a software company. He stays with his family there and works
on his passion – writing. He was raised among stories of different kinds and
cannot sleep without reading a good book at night. He has been part of the
Indian storytelling contest, Inspitale, the 2020 TU-Dublin-Short-Story-Competition. His
short stories have been part of other magazines and journals. His hobby and
passion are to read and write books on various genres including literary,
commercial, and historical fiction, fantasy, etc. His work in progress includes
a historical treasure hunt and a fantasy novel. Some of his favourite authors
are - Matthew Reilly, Andy Mcdermott, Dan Brown, Alex Scarrow, etc.
most entertaining with depth. very pleased.
ReplyDeleteThank you Josh for liking the story
DeleteAwesome storyline.Its One sit reading with great hooking lines to compell you read the next page instantly.Really a mystery till the end.Awesome twist at the end . 5 out of 5 thanksgiving read for me...would recommend to my friends as well.Keep it up.
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